Dodgy music aside that's pretty good.
If I had two gripes, it would be that it's too long (half the length would be fine, I got bored and skimmed through some of it) and you need to pan twice as fast then slow it down in editing: As it stands, it looks odd with the well-shot panning gliding gently, then the people in the background moving at normal speed. Assuming you can't get the people out of the way, then pan quicker then reduce speed would work.
I'd also like to see some height used in places, even standing on a small set of steps would work very well and give a different viewpoint. I'd also try using some different music, something you don't usually like can work well as then you focus more on how the two blend together, rather than just getting into the music. Maybe some '90s hip hop, '80s electronica or some '00s punk for a change? I don't like any of those genres either, so if you did that it wouldn't be for my benefit!
Other than that, it's really good mate. Did it take you long to put together? What editing software did you use?