personally i hate the veilside kit with a passion so its not going to get my vote, thats personal opinion though.
trying to be constructive;
the carbon door doesnt flow to the back like you'd expect it to, just as it reaches the door handle i'd expect the colour to swoop back following the contour of the wheel arch.
the bolt holes on the wide arch kit really need filled and smoothed to make it look right, others have done this on here in the past but it leads to difficulties if you need to take the arch off and also ends up cracking when driven.
im not a fan off the wheels there, they look to fiddly for a two tone car breaking up the simple yin yang look
legally you wont be able to black the covers out on the headlights, however, the internals of a set of post 06 lights can be blacked out as they are projectors, will give the look shown there without the need to put nasty tint on them. maybe matte black internals.
on the headlights you could get the stick on carbon bits that let the line flow round with the bonnet
having no side indicator may get you pulled
thats all i could think of it just doesnt look right to me in the PS there