I would have to agree with Sarnie, the advert needs working on, maybe if you amended/deleted all the negatives could help imho......
This is coming from a person who advertised his roadster for a week saying "electrical this and that"....= no responce...........THEN amamded advert to read full specification and hey presto the phone starts ringing and i have now sold it
My point exactly
It shouldn't be underestimated how powerful the actual text of the advert is. Even spelling mistakes put me of.......